This is my evaluation in the form of a commentary, although I refer the the music in my commentary it has been removed because it made it difficult to hear my voice.

This is my final version of  my teaser trailer unfortunately I didn't have the time to make all of the improvements I had intended to make because of the limited time I had left after then ancillary task. perhaps I would have been more time efficient for me to focus on one area at a time rather than spreading both of them out over the year.

I have Finlay settled on a layout I think is effective and attractive, I have drawn from all I learnt from all the previous iterations to get these two looking as professional as possible. For the magazine I have added more details like the text above the title and optimized the juxtaposition to make all the text as striking as possible wile still being readable. For the poster I opted to move the title to the top to so it doesn't clash with the photo, I also added the red glow and increased the brightness of the background photo. I am very happy with these two pieces, I'm pleased that my work has progressed this much since my first A2 post in November 2011.

These 4 iterations will be my final ones before I make my final piece. with these I have experimented with cooler schemes and tried to make the title look as eye catching as possible. I have done this by changing the opacity of the overlay and then I placed the night sky and moon underneath, i also used gradients on the purple version. of all of these i think the yellow one is the most professional looking however the purple and green ones are far more attention grabbing but less readable. when I make my final one I will have to decide what conventions I want to follow and what ones I want to break.

Here I have attempted two simpler versions, I think they are just are eye catching but look more polished and professional. from now on i will stop development of the poster and begin my final one, i plan to used elements from all my previous iterations.

I think I'm getting closer to completing this section now, with these 3 more minimalist iterations. I think that these are better than the jam packed previous attempts. I have extended the text at the bottom and experimented with with different title positioning, of all these i think the top one is the best. I'm also beginning to think that the title fonts i have been using are all to fancy, I will try something more subtle next time. I may also try and compose and crop the photo differently.

This is my next four iterations that I have done using a different image, think is interesting enough but it isn't as exiting as the other image. Also I think its slightly to dark to see my head, an I have been unable to remedy this. for these iterations I think the titles are striking but no to over complicated, I'm also happy with the general composition. Additionally I have been able to figure out how to create the text a the bottom, on this iteration I wrote this myself and used block capitals and transform to get it right.