I have Finlay settled on a layout I think is effective and attractive, I have drawn from all I learnt from all the previous iterations to get these two looking as professional as possible. For the magazine I have added more details like the text above the title and optimized the juxtaposition to make all the text as striking as possible wile still being readable. For the poster I opted to move the title to the top to so it doesn't clash with the photo, I also added the red glow and increased the brightness of the background photo. I am very happy with these two pieces, I'm pleased that my work has progressed this much since my first A2 post in November 2011.