
In these three iterations I have spent allot of time trying to get the graphics and juxtaposition right, by looking at existing editions of Total film. I think now the textual elements are up to standard, an i will be able to transfer them into my final poster with only minimal modification.
I'm very pleased with the text hierarchy here, details like alternating colours and use of bold block capitals make the articles grab your attention like on a real magazine. the only issue that still remains is the main photo, i have tried here to give it a focal point by adding an old photo of myself. although it looks fairly natural in the scene my expression doesn't relay reflect the situation so even this is substandard in my opinion.
In the two examples bellow I tried to focus on the "welcome to Greyfeild" sign with the blood splatters on it , although the elements fit well together its still not dramatic enough for a front cover. I think the text and graphical elements of this cover are nearing the end of development but the photography can still be better,
I plan to go and gather more images tonight as I cant relay improve on these three iterations until I have some more material.