This is my next four iterations that I have done using a different image, think is interesting enough but it isn't as exiting as the other image. Also I think its slightly to dark to see my head, an I have been unable to remedy this. for these iterations I think the titles are striking but no to over complicated, I'm also happy with the general composition. Additionally I have been able to figure out how to create the text a the bottom, on this iteration I wrote this myself and used block capitals and transform to get it right.